Sunday, April 12, 2009

Broadcast version of Randi Goldklank Story

Channel 7 general manager Randi Goldklank was arrested at Logan Airport today.

She was taken into custody for disorderly conduct and resisting arrest.

She had become severely inebriated before she boarded the plane from Philadelphia to Boston and caused a disturbance on the plane and prompted the flight crew to escort her out of the aircraft.

As police tried to calm Ms. Goldklank down she began to yell obscenities and threatened their jobs.

She was later put under surveillance of Boston Health and Hospital due to her level of intoxication and erratic behavior.

1 comment:

  1. Nice job.
    Simple and clean sentences. On second reference, just call her "Goldklank.''

    In the third graph, I would simplify it even more.

    "Police said she had become severely inebriated before she boarded the plane from Philadelphia to Boston. Witnesses said she caused a disturbance on the plane. That prompted the flight crew to escort her out of the aircraft."

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